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Review:Sinead (romance4ever) says:
My god...Dark whisper you never fail . You captured his grief and what any parent would go through as someone's child's life was cut short. I'm not sure why I felt a personal connection maybe it was just your writing but it was so heart wrenching and the symbol of the rain was magnificent as it symbolises tears, you've got a symbol of dark clouds heavy rain pouring heavy for me it reminded me of a clouded broken heart pouring with pain and crying in its own right. Then you brought in Hermione and her willing to be strong but you can see her pleading with rons picture to talk to comfort her to bring her closer after loosing her own daughter to heartbreak she relates but alas her daughter was to far gone and my heart pleads that'll shell find some way back to Hermione . But draco returns to Hermione and loosely I use that word because I feel you've created a before for them but have not yet let us in on the plan . Thank you for having the heart and sense to write something so beautifully honest and heartfelt . Bravo and again you've created a wonderful story . Please continue

Author's Response: Sinead,

My dear, please accept my apologies at not responding to your review in a timely manner. Sometimes reviews come along that I want to take my time with and really think about what I want to say. Yours is one of those brilliant reviews. Thank you so much.

I can tell from your words that you really felt his sorrow and understand the deep connection with the dark clouds and the pouring rain as a heart pours out grief.

I'm glad that you mentioned Hermione's heartbreak as well, as this story is about them both, not just Draco.

You will see what happens to Rose in the next coming chapters.

You've really captured what I was going for and I appreciate your words because it tells me that as an author, I must be doing something correct. This site is good practice for me as I will eventually (hopefully) write original fiction and try to be published someday.

Thank you so much for your feedback as I write this emotional piece.

Again, please forgive me for not responding more timely. The holidays and two funerals in between has been a whirlwind and I'm just now able to respond to your words.

I will be posting a new chapter to this story as soon as I can. It is written, but I can only post one chapter in the queue at a time. I do hope you come back for more.

My sincerest thanks for your understanding.
Dark Whisper

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