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Review:LoopyLemon says:
Wow! This is really good!

It was well thought out and sounded very educated. Remus always was the smartest one of the group and I find it fascinating to read this. Not very many people write from his perspective so I'm excited to see what you will do with this.

I liked the way you kept the reader guessing as to who's perspective we were reading from (I never read summaries or the character lists, I like to be suprised :P).

The length of the chapter was really nice. It wasn't too long, you could have easily dragged it out, but it was long enough to get the reader interested and to make them want to read more.

I really like what I've seen so far of this, and knowing what happens to Remus (unless this is AU) makes reading this almost bittersweet. I'm also interested in what time period this is set in.

I can't comment much on the plot as this was only an introduction chapter, but I feel your writing style is very strong and so I'm sure the plot is fine.

You seem to know Remus's mind well. I think you will have no problem with your characterisation.

I didn't find any errors in this, though I wasn't really looking for any. It seems very well written.

All in all, good job. I'm interested to see where this goes next :D

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