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Review:Leslie says:
Oh man, this was so good!! I was hoping he would disclose everything to her. This was just sooo sweet!!! I LOVED the "a true Slytherin with the heart of a Gryffindor". Perfect! So true!! Gahh. And the fact that Narcissa is coming just to see Ashley graduate is just wonderful!! Though I'm wondering what Ashley's family will think, cause I assume they're coming, and now she's engaged to someone who isn't graduating and they know very little about! But really, this chapter was one of the best.

I'm also loving how realistic this all is. It's not just that Draco saves the day, or Harry saves the day, Draco comes back, and they live happily ever after. Even though we're getting really close to the end, there are still a lot of struggles that they need to go through, but it's still really sweet and kind of happy. :D haha it's just great that the emotional and physical struggles they've gone through are realistic and not just disappearing as you tie a lot of loose ends up. But yeah, I absolutely loved it. And I'm still just pretty giddy about all the engagement and reunion stuff!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I really liked that line myself :)

How her parents react is disclosed in the next chapter.

Thank you (again!). I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed this chapter. I think you'll enjoy the next one too, its one of my favorites as well.

I didn't want Draco to save the day. I wanted them to struggle, because life's just not like that: being the hero, smoothing everything over,etc. You're right, that's not realistic. They struggled, will struggle, and they know their going to have to struggle for the next few years.

Thanks for continuing to review, it really pushes me to keep writing, knowing that someone really enjoys what I put out :) Hope to hear from you soon!

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