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Review:MargaretLane says:
Oh, wow, I am impressed at how much advance planning you've done.

The sparsity of detail in this chapter is really impressive. Just knowing that his face and voice were terrifying and the general description you give of them is much more effective than if you'd described him in minute detail.

I'm guessing Albus is the boy with the power to defeat the Paradox, but I could be wrong. Maybe it'll be somebody he'll meet at Hogwarts - a classmate.

And I love the term "Blood Lord".

I wonder what you mean by they'll have to fight darkness with darkness. Does it mean the good guys and particularly your young boy - Albus or another - will have to do evil themselves in order to defeat evil? Like the Ministry in Half-Blood Prince. It sounds that way; that this boy will be able to use evil and illegal powers but will only use them against people who are themselves evil. But of course, that might just be what you WANT us to think and there might be another hidden meaning.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote an entire plot skeleton before I started to write the actual story. It's usually the way I do stuff.

Thanks! I like to use detail in prologue-like chapters.

I won't reveal anything else, but your guess might be pretty close... ;)

Thanks so much for reviewing!


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