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Review:CambAngst says:
Awww, such a sweet chapter. You did a really good job of capturing the strange, uneasy, "three steps forward and two steps back" nature of teen romance. George and Brienne are so clueless, but in a really charming way that feels very natural for their age.

From the outset, I liked the way that you start to draw out the not-so-subtle differences that are beginning to separate George from Fred and Lee as he begins to realize his feelings toward Brienne. He's a little more reserved, not as quick to mock or make light of things. He isn't shoveling food into his face as fast as two hands will allow. ;)

Fred, for his part, seems to have picked up on what's happening between George and Brienne. I guess it shouldn't be that difficult, since he sees it first-hand with his brother and Angelina has probably been dropping some pointed questions in his direction. Lee, on the other hand, has no idea what's going on and it shows.

The scene in the courtyard was just about perfect. I honestly can't recommend a thing. It was that perfect sort of moment where they both seem surprised by the outcome buy not really unhappy. The only thing that seems to worry both of them is whether they've made the other person uncomfortable.

I really liked Brienne's outburst on the train. As you root for her and George to get together, it is easy to forget that she's less than a year removed from the loss of her mother and sometimes she's not going to be in the mood for the sort of excessive ribbing that Lee and the twins are known for. Add to that the awkwardness between her and George and it made perfect sense.

And I really loved her reunion with her father. That was a heart-warming moment.

Another lovely chapter. I'll be back again soon!

Author's Response: Hi! Aww, what a great review! This is one of my favourite chapters I think (if you can have a favourite chapter of your own work) because of all the emotion running through it, so I'm so glad you liked it!

And I wanted to make George and Brienne take some sort of step in their relationship, and see how the others react to that.

Thank you very much!

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