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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Scottie,
First let me say I am enjoying your story. But I have noticed a few spelling errors. If the books aren't close you can go to a few sites that have loads of information. JKR's site, Mugglenet, or even Wikipedia. The two that surprised me was your spelling of Kingsleys last name, it's Shacklebolt, the other was for the most destructive tree we have ever seen, the Whomping Willow. Other wise I really loved the exchange with the Bug. For one you allowed, Ron and Hermione not to mention Harry,to have adult reactions. Not many authors out her this early. After her "Biography" of Albus, and her treatment of Ms Bagshot, she has crossed the line. It's time she paid the price. And why in Merlins name did Kingsley allow her to be the interviewer? I expected Luna, or her father would have been the one to get the story straight. The Hogswarts portion was good. I have an idea as to who will take over the DADA. But I just don't know how she is going to handle the trust fund, the Weezergamot, and teaching. She is my friend and one terrific dueler, take that Trixie! You are right to save the Memorial for the next chapter. There is so much to be said. Minerva probably extended her invitation to the Four because they would have found ways to be together, why not have some control? Please get busy typing. I want that next chapter!
FoM

Author's Response: Thanks again for your review! For whatever reason those two mistake must have missed my proofreading.

I don't really have much of a use for Rita Skeeter during the story, so I thought I'd honour cannon before she makes her leave.

Thanks again, and next chapter will be up shortly


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