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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm back, I'm back! I'm so, so, so sorry that I haven't been reviewing your wonderful work. I've been typing and adding onto some of my own stories, life has been incredibly full of real issues and I've been near exploding. Can you believe that?
Anyway, we're back with Pansy. I thought her daily routine was really well written and the sense of time I got from it was easy to follow. I could really tell that it had been a month, two months, since she had started working and already she's changed so much! I'm not sure if I'm more proud or amused by the way she's going through her life, trying to appear as a better person to the masses. I liked the descriptions of her going to restaurants, biding her time and being polite to people while still holding her family's honor as being the most important. Well done!
Anyway, her mother! What on earth is going on with her? I'm actually a bit worried and that little interaction between them was so strong and awkward that I couldn't look away. I could practically feel Pansy's unease and her mother, who seems to be fading away, is starting to bother me. I hope things get resolved between them, I really do and her worry for Pansy was almost heartbreaking. The way it stayed with Pansy during her entire day was really wonderful to read as well and I felt some sympathy for her. And I really don't blame her for wanting a moment to herself either, I understand how that must have been eating away at her. And lets talk about that jerk Cyril! What is his issue? I think I would have hexed him a good one but poor Pansy was trying to keep her composure and she didn't need his nasty attitude. But I was happy that the others were supporting her through it and the fact that Nicola walked her out and made sure she got home was very nice. I'm really eager for more and I promise that I'll be getting more regular reviews!
Oh! The fact that Pansy is drinking again is worrying as well and I'm hoping that she doesn't start talking to her reflection again. It always worries me when she does.
Anyway, I'll be back and excellent job! Hope to see you on the forums!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello again!

I can absolutely believe that you've been close to exploding because I've been the exact same way! There's just too much to do, isn't there? :)

I'm glad that you found the change in time easy to follow. It certainly would be a boring story if I wrote every day of her life, so the jump was necessary, and I'm glad it seemed as though two months had passed.

Yes, something is going on with her mother: she isn't feeling too well... She'll continue to appear, though, so you'll find out more about her soon. I'm really glad that the emotions in that scene came across so well since it was definitely an emotional scene.

Cyril... I can't remember if I was planning on revealing this at a later date or not... but since you asked you'll get an answer! Cyril's problem is largely found in the fact that his family has always been on the Light side and they fought on the Light side during the past two wars. Death Eaters (perhaps not Pansy's father in particular but Death Eaters all the same) ended up killing his father and he hates them for that. He sees Pansy as a Death Eater herself.

I really enjoyed writing that part of the scene because it was nice to see Pansy finally getting support.

Thank you for reviewing and I look forward to reading your future reviews!

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