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Review:HPPC Staff says:
Hey there! Iím here to leave you one of the reviews you won for placing in the HPPC writing challenge.

Aww no song? :P I was just getting used to the songfic style you use, but your narrative is beautifully written as always.

Oh I see what you did there! Keeping the characters unnamed until the very end is such a tease! I didnít know who the pairing was but looking back on it I LOVE the fact that it was Remus and Sirius. I donít normally pair them together, but this was a believable moment for them and the emotion really came through.

I love that you use the word Ďweí a lot. It emphasizes their bond and makes the story that much more connected to the central plot. ĎWe are no longer Remus and Sirius. We are one, together, forever.í LOVED that ending line. So beautiful and so fitting for an ending.

I loved the passion at the beginning and wasnít really expecting it from the tone of the other stories. But then again I donít expect every story you write to be a sad one. I really liked this lust filled secretive love plot and itís such a contrast from the sweet and innocent love stories.

Wonderfully brilliant.
HPPC Staff

Author's Response: Sorry about no song! :P
Yeah, I really like having people wondering who it is and stuff;P
Yeah, I absolutely love them together, I really believe that they are meant for each other.
I did believe that they are bonded very well, and very connected.
Goodness, I am so glad that you liked my last line, and that you thought it was beautiful!
I am so glad you liked this, because it was really different than I have ever written!
Thank you so much for the sweet review(:

~Sarah
Xxxx


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