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Review:HPPC Staff says:
Hey there! Iím here to leave you one of the reviews you won for placing in the HPPC writing challenge.

Rascal Flatts must be one of your favorites, huh? I like almost everything theyíve done. But this song has to be my personal favorite. Itís beautifully sad, like a lot of their songs, but it hits somewhere inside and really stays with me. It goes along well with this story.

It was a little confusing in the beginning not knowing who was narrating and who had died. But I like the mystery, it made me want to keep reading to find out who it was. Survivorís guilt is often a very hard thing to write about. Poor James is blaming himself for Albusís death, and heíll never know. Heíll never know the reasons why Albus choose the path he did and I think that comes across so strong especially helped by the lyrics.

Powerfully dark and interesting.
HPPC Staff

Author's Response: Yes! They are my favorite band(:
This one is my second favorite of their songs, and I have been actually thinking of doing another song fic of my favorite of theirs.

I actually tried to make it confusing, because I wanted that mystery to be there.
It actually was pretty hard to write about, it was heartbreaking to have to kill off Albus, who is easily my favorite next generation character.
Yeah, I felt that James, being who he is, would blame himself, and would want to know why he did end up killing himself, but he never will.
I am glad you liked it, thank you(:

~Sarah
Xxxx


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