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Review:AJSII says:
One of the most important parts of telling a story is characterization. You fail at this. You are basing Ron and Harries personalities on stupid, immature things they did when young. These reactions do not fit with the characters revealed in the books.

You can say that you are simply changing them to fit your story; but if that was the way Harry was, he wouldn't have been able to do the things he did.

I wasn't able to even finish the second chapter because your characterization was so bad. Seriously!

Author's Response: I'd say thanks for the review but it wasn't a nice review was it?

You don't like my story fine - don't read it.
I don't write characters as they were in the books.

If I wrote this story as the characters were in the books then the story wouldn't have worked.

I'm all for constructive critisism but this doesn't benifit either of us in any way.

If you can help it, please don't review any of my stories again, it'll just be a waste of time.

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