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Review:Wylloe says:
So I read your whole story and I;m going to be BRUTALLY honest. I think your writing style needs development and your dialogue needs work too. You can tell you're an amateur. I know, however, how hard writing a complete story is, and I loved the concept. You really are a talented writer, and I think with more practice you are going to be an AMAZING writer and maybe go on to get published someday. But it needs work. I'm not trying to be a complete arse though; I just thought you might want some constructive criticism.

Author's Response: I totally want constructive criticism. At least the way you've chosen to do it is constructive as opposed to mean. You are correct; I have never written anything until this year when I discovered fanfiction. Thank you for reading my story though!

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