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Review:Ardeith says:
I'm so proud of both Sirius and Severus! They handled that in an amazingly mature way. :-) I love Sirius admitting that Beth cares for Sev. And even better...how Sev reacted to it! I didn't expect him to pick up on Sirius' line. :-)

Really good lines were:

"Dumbledore had said to guard information as closely as those you held dear… but what happened when the two conflicted?" Aww.Beth holds Sev dear!!

and:

"Was it possible that she’d be angry at him, that he was a pocket of her life she didn’t want to deal with when she didn’t have to?" I know it's a little line, but I think it's a big idea, because right now Sneth is a little pocket, but don't they want it to be more?? (I guess this one resonates with me...sigh! Time will tell...)

And I love the ending! Though I have to think about all the implications... for Beth with the Order, but mainly for Sev with the Death Eaters.

Author's Response: I'm proud of my boys, too! :) Look at Sirius, growing up before our eyes, yeah? He'll always be somewhat childish, though. In the best way possible... but still childish. But I suppose that's not the point! I think everyone should be grateful that Severus is as astute at listening to Sirius as he is, that's the point of this!

Time will tell what lies in store for Beth and Severus, indeed. I'm actually very excited for everyone to reach the point I'm writing now, solely because I keep wanting to give things away in review responses, and it's getting rather onerous! :3

Have I told you lately how fantastic you are? I honestly cannot ever tell you what it means to me to have such a dedicated reviewer, and for my two biggest stories -- that's not something I take lightly at all. Thank you so, so much! ♥


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