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Review:CambAngst says:
Whither Ron and Hermione? I can't help it, I'm back for some more.

I love how the two of them get a bit snarky with one another at the beginning. It felt like vintage Ron and Hermione, although he gives up just a bit easier than usual. Of course, the circumstances aren't quite the same, so it felt just fine.

You wove in so many neat little details in the description of Hermione's old rooming house. The place absolutely sounds like the sort of building that wizards might inhabit, shaky-looking and untidy. And the mysterious pair that dropped her off when she first moved in... hmmnnn... Just based on the physical description, they sound somewhat like Pansy Parkinson and Blaise Zabini. I guess I'll have to wait to find out, though.

So somebody stopped the grocery bags from falling, apparently wandlessly and subconsciously. I like it.

I was about ready to stand up out of my seat and cheer as Hermione sends Jonathan off to Greece all by his lonesome. Who knows whether we'll be fortunate enough to have seen the last of him, but I say once again for the record, "Boo! Jonathan!"

I love the determination you gave Hermione in that section. She knows enough to realize that something has changed in her life and she has that Hermione-like need to figure out what's really going on. Jonathan feels like little more than a speed bump in that scene.

Poor Ron. I gather that he had worked rather hard to win Chelsea's affections, but now it all seems like it's about to come to naught. I did think that he handled her fairly diplomatically and wasn't a complete ogre about it, which seemed like typical softie Ron. I think you're doing an awesome job with his characterization.

And now they're off to London! I'm so eager to see where this development leads! Love this story more and more with each chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're back! I couldn't wait to have Ron and Hermione bicker again, but like you said, they've just met so they're a bit more polite, for now. :D Yay, you noticed the accidental magic, great eye! Jonathan will make an appearance again, but we can cheer together that he's gone for now. Hermione needs to find out what's up or she wouldn't sleep one day in Greece, so she sends Jonathan on his jolly way so she can embark on this journey without him and with Ron. Makes me giggle madly all over again. I was very happy to send Jonathan away, too.

Ron cared about Chelsea but when it comes to Hermione, he can't help it, but Chelsea pales in comparison because there's too much connection between him and Hermione, even if he doesn't know all of it yet.

I'm beside myself with joy that you're enjoying this story. That's so, so lovely, thank you! :)

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