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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! First of all, you've done one of my favorite things which is have a back to Hogwarts on the express chapter. Something about the set up of those, old friends, a new year, I just love it. I liked the introduction to Sirius as well as the information on his family. I think showing the four of them together as a family was a really awesome touch.

The mention if Snape as well as lily marking in her Potions book also set an awesome tone and I really appreciated your inclusion of James's thoughts regarding Lily and Severus's falling out.

The sorting as well as our OC's entrance was as equally entertaining, and I really loved how welcoming lily and Mary were to their new house mate!

This chapter just filled me with back to Hogwarts warm fuzzies ♥

Can't wait to read the next!

Jami

Author's Response: Hello!

I like "back to school" chapters as well. Something about seeing the castle in a distance and such.

I tried to give them a sense of familiarity without going too much into detail. I'm happy you liked it!

Thank you for the feedback!

Ral

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