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Review:AriesGirl40 says:
the chapter did seem rushed a bit, you left some words out and I really dont remember Harry calling Ginny a lier, must have been in the previous chapter? Not saying I didnt enjoy the chapter, you still got what you were trying to say across. Really and truely. It just felt more like a blow by blow of a boxing match or a horse race. First this happened, then this happened and in the end here are your consequences. To make it better, add some actions, the players seem so stiff today. Ginny looked like she was about to cry, she was bent forward letting her hair fan around her face like a shield. when asked what happened, Harry raked his hand through his hair in hopes of finding an instant answer. That sort of thing.
Your story is not boreing, you asked how we thought you could have made this a better chapter after being laid up for a bit. I hope my answer is an acceptible one and I will see you soon for the next chapter. I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next :)

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