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Review:MargaretLane says:
Yay, this chapter is up. I was waiting for it.

You've a capital "t" in the middle of the first sentence of the second paragraph, "Once they got to Diagon Alley, They first went to Gringotts Bank to get money out of his parentís vaults."

*laughs at Albus trying to act like he goes to Gringotts every day*

*pokes Binns* The history of the wizarding world would probably be fascinating if taught by somebody halfway competent. I mean, he dismisses mythology, which is an important historical source. Anybody who does that has no business teaching history.

I'm amused by Lily wanting an owl, since I mentioned that in my story too. I guess it's something fairly likely, but it still amuses me when I find coincidences like that.

And Albus's owl sounds really cute.

Love your description of the ice-cream. Very creative and amusing. I don't blame Lily for being reluctant to eat them though.

Also love the fact that you've Mr. Ollivander's son running the shop now. I never imagined him as having a son. I guess I sort of thought of him as being a childless bachelor, dedicated to his business, but there's no canon on that and this is an interesting take on it. Plus it seems to have been passed from father to son all along, as his name is the same as the shop's, so it'd be good if he'd a son to take over.

*grins* I like the fact he hasn't his father's memory. It makes him an individual character, rather than just a carbon copy of his father.

And elder wand...ooh, I wonder if this is a harbringer of something. "Wand of elder, never prosper." I'm guessing Albus will prosper though, no matter what wand he has.

I think my sister had a rag-doll named Pinkie or something like that when she was little.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'm happy I have someone who points out mistakes so I can fix them!

Binns really is a boring teacher. History is my favorite subject, but even I would be bored if I had Binns! Somebody should fire him.

I really think that any kid would want an owl. I know I would want one!

I thought the idea of regular ice cream in the wizarding world really boring, so I decided to tweak the ice cream a little bit.

On Pottermore (I don't know if you have an account) one of the exclusive pieces of information is about Mr. Ollivander. It's actually very interesting. In there it states that he has a wife, a son, and a deceased daughter. I know, I always imagined him as single too.

I really wanted Albus's wand to be special, to show that he is different, so I decided to give him an Elder Wand.

I know I used to name a lot of things Pinkie. :)

Thanks for Reading and Reviewing every chapter so far! :) :)



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