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Review:shadowycorner says:
I think I'm starting to get addicted to your writing. I don't even know where to start with this. First off, even though I might have said this before, you're incredibly good at this stream of consciousness thing. I know you probably know, but I had to say it anyway, because it's SO GOOD.

I'm experiencing so many emotions right now. It will be tough to keep this review 12+ and not get carried away. The first part was so heart-breaking. I've been in love, and my mind just snapped back to the time it was crazy and running and impossible to understand. It was too running along the lines of remusremusremusremus and oh my god the world and the weather and this and that...it was chaotic just like emotions and human brain is, but at the same time it made so much sense. The last paragraph of that section was beautiful in a really sad way.

Then the other section...just whoa. I usually skip the characteristics of the story: warnings etc. I only noticed the ship, so I thought this was going to be a good old angsty Tonks, and then I'm in the middle of this monster sentence and I swear my jaw just dropped. I love when stories shock me like this. I also loved how Remus thought of Sirius and Sirius and Sirius and everything he said and did and thought, and what they did together. And then what Tonks does for him because she loves him...it was so twisted and haunting and fascinating at the same time.

I still don't think what else exactly to say. There's so many more things, I just can't find the words. All I can say is just that this was...powerful . It really left a very strong impression on me, and that's amazing writing.

Liz

Author's Response: Well, that's always a good start to a review. :D
Honest to God, when I write stream-of-consciousness, I'm always like, "oh god what if it's wrong and i'm the only person who thinks like this oh god". So, erm, no, I don't really know until you tell me. So thank you.

And you think I can actually write love! Yay! I'm still a teenager, so I generally think that what I would perceive as 'love' and the emotions associated with it doesn't actually fit that definition at all... but then it worked somehow, apparently.
That's honestly one of the best compliments I've ever got ever. Wow.

I'm glad you didn't skip this story, despite the warnings, because otherwise I wouldn't have had this review!
That giant sentence was heartbreaking to write... my OTP's history all in stream-of-consciousness, in little fragments that don't quite make sense. Challenging, to say the least.
And I'm also glad that the monster sentence actually worked for you... I've got a ton of complaints about it... it's nice to have a reviewer who I don't have to explain that to. >.>

Okay, so now my ego is absolutely huge because of this. Erm. Well. Thank you so much for your amazing review.


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