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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Jess,
Can I just say that I LOVE your first paragraph? From the start, you had me laughing at your extremely well-written imagery. Eggs as shrapnel and friendly fire? LOL! Even your graphics has an excellent 'one of kind' sweater.

You did an excellent job at characterizing someone that I didn't know and giving him wonderful contemplative qualities of 'the silent-type.'

It is truly heart-breaking that he harbors such secret love for the one his brother seems to be winning... or is he? Hmm. There can be a lot in a smile. I thought it was so sweet of her... and a great ending.

You made me really feel for him. Great job in this little one-shot. You expertly describe everything so vividly.

10/10

Best wishes on your challenges...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so so glad that you enjoyed this! I had a lot of fun with the first paragraph; I couldn't help putting in a little warfare in Lysander's breakfast haha. It's funny that you mention the graphic, because this model has always been the face of Lysander in my mind and I love this photo of him in a sweater - it's actually what inspired me to write this!

And I'm so happy that you like my characterization! Even though this isn't a long piece, I felt like I had gotten to know Lysander very well over the few weeks that I was writing this. And I'm very proud of him :)

There is a lot in a smile! I like to think that Lily still holds a special place in her heart for Lysander and she's unsure of how she feels about Lorcan because of it. There could be something in the future; that's what I wanted to convey with the ending - a sense of hope. So I'm glad that you liked it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jess :D


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