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Review:Jchrissy says:
First of all, I wondered if the title was from Streissand! Awesome choice.

Anyway, I usually shy away from Sirius OC stories, just because people don't usually try and explain why Harry never would have been told about them. But the way you started this with Harry's day, him opening the package and being the entire reason the story is started in the first place, is really original!

I'm a big baby when it comes to Sirius feels. That man endured so much and got such little happiness with the time he had left. He lost everything, and then when he thought he was so close to getting it back, it all slipped out from under him. and bah :(.

This was such an intriguing start! I'm excited to go back and get to know your version of the young Mr. Black.

I also think you did a good job getting Harry right. I could never write anything from his PoV.. I just don't get him. I have a one shot where I needed to do a small section of his, and the only reason it turned out half way decent is because my beta picked it apart for me. Really, I feel like he's one of the hardest characters, so awesome job getting him right in this!

I also wondered whatever happened to the flat he purchased in London when he was younger, and I love the idea of the landlord saving the things until they can finally be claimed. I think Remus's intuition to give Harry those was perfect, and again a very nice way to slide us into this!

Author's Response: Hello there!

First of all, thank YOU for all the lovely reviews, they were a great way to start my morning!

This story makes me a little nervous to write, I had taken a break from writting (4 years of break to be exact) and then this idea of the letter and Harry kept bugging me so I had to put it down, but my English was a bit rusty at that moment and I'm still desperately trying not to fall into any cliches with this.

I'm so glad that you like my description of Harry, he is one that is always tricky to write. In my other story he's all grown up and you have a little space to play around, but writting him during canon years is very hard.

Thank you for reading, I'll answer your other reviews too, but I just wanted to tell you how happy and humbled I am by your comments and how much I appreciate the feedback.

Also, I'll be finishing "Before They Fall" today, so let's see if my intuition about those plans was right! =)

XoXo

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