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Review:firefly910 says:
First review!

Only three months away from Baby Harry and Baby Nev! Oh it's going to be so cute reading about them. I can't wait to read how you write James as a father because I know you are going to make unbearable adorable!

The way you write Dumbledore's dialogue reminds me exactly of how he speaks in the film. You convey him as a person who commandeers a room in not just his speech but also in the little details too. I don't think I could ever write him that well!

OH THE LAST PART WAS LIKE WATCHING A TEEN DRAMA!

I am proud of Sirius for not beating Sev up. Because I don't think he would use magic, I picture him wanting to give him a good old fashioned thump. It does show that Sirius really does care for Beth. It appears that he's finally understood that there's nothing he can do to change the situation so he needs to make sure he keeps Beth as a friend.

Things are going to get very tricky when Sev tells Beth everything. They're both just putting themselves in so much danger. And I just sit here and worry that you're going to make me read some very very tense chapters and MY HEART WON'T BE ABLE TO TAKE IT!

I am also intrigued as to how you're going to have Beth react to the whole prophecy business. She can be level headed but she can also fly off the handle when something happens she thinks she can't deal with. And I'm also wondering how you're going to develop Peter's story line . . . LOVE ALL THE LAYERS TO THIS STORY!!

I do like /your/ version of Snape. The younger version. I don't think I can ever be a canon Snape fan. I understand why he was the way he was but I still do feel like some of his behaviour was just a little extreme. But like I said the Snape I read about in your story feels different to me (not in a bad way, you do very well to portray him as JKR painted him as a young man) I think it's because it's before all of that happened so I'm gaining more of an insight into why he is the way he is in the Hogwarts era.

Sorry if that made no sense! I'm just trying to figure out how I feel about Snape as a character!

Author's Response: I know you've seen in recent forums status updates of mine, but I just feel like you should know that I am having an absolute blast writing James as a dad. :D And at the same time, it's weird to think that the baby I'm writing about is Harry Potter, the Chosen One, the boy who saves the world... how times change.

I agree with you -- Sirius would not have used magic when he could have smashed Sev's nose in with his own fists. So let's be glad he didn't! He does care about her; he wasn't lying to himself about that. It's the /type/ of caring he got confused over.

Very tense chapters are indeed ahead! Those are always the most fun for me to write, though (of course) and I've found that what I've had fun writing, others have had fun reading. So I'm very excited to see your reactions to those! I think the prophecy bit's been answered in the next chapter, of course. ;)

I'm very flattered that you like my portrayal of Snape, especially knowing as I do your views on him. ♥ I do strive to make him canon and am thrilled you see him that way!

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