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Review:LillyRoseanne says:
Hey,

I've done the terrible terrible thing of reading someone's fic from the beginning and not reviewed until the last chapter, how terrible of me. (In my defence I had to pre-load chapters 4 - 15 as I was going to be away from the Internet for a couple of hours so had to prepare in advance so couldn't have reviewed even if I'd wanted to :P) However, considering I ran out of chapters to read I decided that now was as good a time as any to offer my thoughts without the requirement of a penny (you can send me a virtual penny if you wish of course, I find the giving of virtual items to be most gratifying) You really should take the fact that I simply had to read everything I could before reviewing as a compliment, I really couldn't stop...

Anyway to the real meat of the question, what did I think?

I really enjoyed this, Dramione is a ship that if definitely growing on me, especially the well written stuff, and I am currently attempting it myself. On the whole this IS well written, the bluntness and complete lack of subtlety and sensitivity of Ron is very canon and I think that is what makes me like it so much. I like that the clichéd 'makeover thing' hasn't really been the focus of everything, you did it in a way that didn't make it seem over the top and it wasn't like it was the main focus of the fic, she did it to piss Ron off and make the most of what she had to make him jealous and just happened to fall in love with Draco in the first place.

I LOVE the bit where she attacks Ron with Bludgers, it's brilliant! Definitely something I could see Hermione doing. I love the fact that she keeps thumping Draco, I can totally relate to that kind of thing.

Ron is a douche... Seriously? A Quidditch Match?!!? How dense can that boy be?!!? *Le Sigh* Ahhh well.

I love Teddy, he is FAB!!!

Draco is so sweet, I want him... That is all... I gather there is a queue, I will be obliterating anyone who stands in my way :P

So, yeah...

I Love it, please post more I would really like to know how you see this ending :D

Much Love
LillyRoseanne
xxx

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