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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hello, sorry it has taken me so long to get this review posted! I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. I like the balance between character development (especially Rose) and moving the plot forward.

I like the clever names you come up with for pubs and things, like The Poisoned Apple. Little details like this make the story come alive. A couple of things that made me laugh were the piss-vandal incident in the ladies room and the Guernica reference. Besides being clever, it worked: I could imagine the fighters contorted and entangled body parts caught mid-motion. :)

I noticed a couple small grammar things, but nothing worth worrying over.

There are some interesting questions raised in this chapter, like what is keeping Rose too busy to work on this story? Is Oliver Wood masquerading as Viktor Krum? And if so, why? Hopefully the answers will eventually be revealed! :)

Author's Response: Ah! I'm so glad you got the Guernica reference. Bit of my art history nerd coming out there ;) I have a very lovely Beta reader, but I'll be sure to give the chapter a once-over myself for grammar issues--thanks for letting me know! And yes, some interesting questions indeed... they will certainly be answered as the plot unfolds, promise!

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