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Review:Jchrissy says:
First of all, I LOVE the title. It just made me giggle from the start.

I think this may be the last thing of your I haven't read and reviewed; you better get to writing missy! ;).

There isn't a ton I can say about this because it's obviously just the beginning. I have a lot of unanswered questions that I would point out if it were a one shot, but it's set up to be a longer story so those unanswered questions are good to keep us reading!

I really like the details you've well placed. Like the fact that a Greengrass, whether it's Astoria or Daphne, teaches. Our main OC is clearly a good student, and stressed often. James has that fun, myschevous personality. A lot of little things that help us get a good idea were really well disbursed through this :).

Oh and Mrs. Norris JR hahah! Loved it!

The only thing I missed a bit in this is a little more physical description, but this would have been a hard chapter to add those because of the fuzzy night she already had.

I do hope you continue this, as it has quite an interesting start!! :)

Jami

Author's Response: Hi again!

I know, I'm a bad updater. I'll try to reform or something. =P Thanks for prodding me, I really needed someone to do it. =)

I'm glad that this fic piqued your interest. I guess that out of all my fics, this one is closest of current fanfic mainstream with its characters and storyline. Hence I want to make it bit more, than just another Next Gen fic in the archives.

I'll add more physical description to a next chapter. I do notice now, that it's quite sparse here. Thanks for pointing it out. =)

Thank you for the review! =)


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