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Review:Dezire_427 says:
Lovely work on this chapter too... Especially loved Norah's misunderstanding, a very well written scene. Abd I also liked Roxy, seems very friendly and open and likable. And I totally look forward to the next chapter, with its team practise. Good luck!
PS. I feel Norah has a very sharp, organised mind, but was that stirring in her stomach really for food? ;)

Author's Response: I didn't know quite what I wanted to do with Roxanne until I started writing, and amazing enough, she just flowed onto the page as if she had been fleshed out in my mind from the start. I fell in love with her instantly, and something told me that Norah would like her too. So I went with it.

Got to love misunderstandings, right? Norah thinks it's an easy enough mistake, especially since she doesn't know much about her players' personal lives. And Fred looks like he should be married. In her eyes, anyway. But you know what happens when you assume xD.

I've wrapped up the interview in the next chapter, and I'm currently working on the team practice. Or should I say, steadily working towards it, because Oliver seems as if he has other plans, aha.

Hehe. She says of course. I say of course not. Which one of us is the honest one ;)?


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