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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there!

This was definitely a nice little comedy piece. I really enjoyed your choices of Villains to include. Specifically the White Witch, because I think she's often forgot about as a Villain.

All of the characters opinions on who they wanted to take down first was a really nice addition, and I loved the fact that they really just couldn't get along. I mean, come one, we have some of the most evil people ever in one room, it was bound to take a turn for the worse :P.

I know I've commented on this before, but I do really think it would be worth it to watch your grammar and punctuation. As a reader, we want to see that you care about your writing, even if it's just a funny one shot, and the best way to show that is to polish the punctuation (mainly dialog). The forums have a lot of awesome tutorials if you aren't sure about some things!

I always love a nice comedy, thank you for sharing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I will try hard to fix my grammar, I just don't have time right now, I am very busy with school.

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