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Review:shadowycorner says:
Here for the tag, hi! :)

I always like reading about missing moments and Sirius' time during PoA especially. This story was very well-written and it conveyed all that it wanted to convey, I think. There was Sirius visiting James and Lily's house, which is something I think he'd definitely do after his escape from Azkaban. The sadness of that scene overwhelmed me. It was sad to see Sirius wander around the house of his dead friends, stumbling upon old photos and unfinished letters. You could also feel his determination and anger at Peter, especially when he mentioned how the rat had been living comfortably with a wizarding family while Prongs was six feet under and Moony all alone in the world. That just broke my heart all over again.

There was also some action and for a moment I really wanted Sirius to get Peter, even though it wouldn't be canon. But oh well. And then he saw Harry and it made me both happy and sad. I wish they had more time together. :(

Anyway, this was a really nice read. Great job.

Liz

Author's Response: Hi and thanks for the review! =)

I'm glad you thought it was a good read. Before I started to write this, I was sure it would be a Marauders era one-shot with some happy Halloween stuff and filled with harmless pranks. But then I just saw a Sirius from PoA wandering in the ruins of the house in my mind, and I just had to write it this way. =)


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