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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor. ♥

I have an unhealthy obsession with him. You write him so perfectly! :D

Also, Natasha shouldn't be too upset about being in Slytherin, it's a house of ambition! And cunning-ness! Just because she's in Slytherin doesn't mean she's evil! D:

(I'm a Hufflepuff by the way, not a Slytherin - I'm just being Hufflepuff-y. :p)

I have a bad feeling because Clint keeps getting pushed aside - not really pushed aside, but I feel like he's going to be forgotten or something. D: Maybe it's just because I love him so much and not seeing him the whole chapter makes me sad. :p

AND JILY AGAIN! ♥ Although, I think Lily is being a BIT unreasonable! She's being quite rude to James!

NO, LILY. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO HURT MY JAMES. HE'S TOO MUCH OF A SWEETHEART.

:D

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I'll try and read the rest soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Haha, oh Kayla! Your little obsession for Thor is so adorable. If I could, I would so send you a box of Thor plushies and action figures. But thank you for complimenting me on my portrayal of him. It makes me happy when my character(s) seem somewhat realistic.

And don't worry. Natasha will definately adjust to her house. She'll sort of gain that pride for being a Slytherin later, because I agree, she is ambitious and cunning -- which is what makes her beast.

And don't feel sad about Clint. I have a whole chapter dedicated to him and Tasha, you just haven't read it yet. ;)
Don't worry, he's far from forgotten.

And yesh, JILY! Lily's just undergoing sexual tension with James...she's still...conflicted(?) But don't worry, she'll come around sooner or later. She has to right?

And thank you for the lovely rating as well as the review. Hope to see you soon. :D

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