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Review:married to black says:
Fabulous chapter! It's been too long since you last updated! I'm glad you haven't completely ditched the story - it was getting quite intriguing. But alas, you updated and I am pleased as I can be :D

Whenever I read this, an English accent goes off in my head. You just capture the formal talking that JKR writes the HP books so well and write it perfectly in your own story that I cannot help but also read your work in the English accent. Keep up that great writing style.

I feel as if I comment on your flawless vocab, sentence structure and all that jazz so often - need I say it once more? Your writing is just so beautifully written!

Now, the actual content, I enjoyed very much. I am so excited to learn of Vesper's revenge plan for Narcissa. Knowing how quick-witted and fiery Vesper is (or at least, that's how she comes off), I bet it'll be a plan of excellence and amusement! Lucius won't see it coming. AH SO EXCITED. Please, UPDATE. And don't take so long this time, won't you? I was getting pretty desperate for a new chapter. Wouldn't want me going through that again ;)

Love your story, you are great. Keep it up and MORE MORE MORE - more is always great when the thing is awesome, LIKE THIS STORY!

p.s. that epiphany part made me squirt my milk out of my nose while I was drinking it. TOO. DARN. FUNNY! Hehehehe.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I know it took me forever to update! I've just been so busy with school and midterms, oh gawsh it's been eating up all my time! But I'm back, and I plan to update weekly, so stay posted!

Your reviews are amazing and very encouraging. I look forward to them every time I post a new chapter. I'm so glad you enjoy my story and I hope you continue reading on!

Oh dear, squirting milk sounds like some funny business, hahaha. The next chapter might make you squirt milk out of your ears!

Hope to read more reviews from you soon! Thanks love xx

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