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Review:ohmymerlin says:
I love James so much, but seriously, he needs to MAN UP AND GROW A PAIR!

I just want to whack him across the head with a newspaper to try and make him see sense!

And I love him so much! :p

You are such a talented writer, you've made me absolutely love him yet get so angry at him! :p

I loved the way he didn't want to call Louis because even after all that, he didn't want his pride to be shattered. :p

Fred is kind of wise, but I think he might have to take his own advice, the silly duffer! :p

At least he didn't sleep with anyone else this time! :D

Although James was kind of in the wrong for storming out of the interview, I don't think his family should have been so harsh on him. They should have just celebrated and be happy for him! :(

And then slip it in at the end but be nice about it rather than a full rant-thingy.

Ah well, they're looking out for him so I guess it's kind of good. :)

Anyway, I loved this chapter and how fast it came! You must be superwoman! :p

10/10! :D

Author's Response: This chapter was written quickly, after the reaction of the last one! I got completely stuck with how to make things happen, and then I found my inspiration and knocked out three chapters. So there's more to come in the very near future!

James does need to sort himself out a bit here. He's on a slippery slope right now, and it's not good! His family don't help him, because he doesn't respond well to being berated like this. Unfortunately, they don't really know how to deal with him in a situation like this, so it's all getting worse.

James has a big ego. A lot of the time, this is his downfall. Ironically, in this instance if he'd just stuck to his guns and NOT gone on a night out with Louis, things would be better for him. As you will see with the next update. :)

Freddie is a funny one. Occasionally, he has a gem of advice. He just has a different way of looking at things, which means that a lot of the time he comes across as a bit of a fool, but when he's right he's VERY sensible. More to come from him, including why he can't take his own advice :)

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