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Review:Random girl says:
Oh my god, that was terrifying! Poor Marta, Benjamin is so evil and has a scary amount of power :( I definitely think he has something to do with her necklace and also maybe some type of ghost creature :/ as he said he doesn't miss peeing, therefore he did do it at some stage! Meaning he was alive at some stage... possibly!! Maybe I wrong about that and yes it is a weird thing to pick up on!! Haha I can't believe I'm so behind on this story I didn't even notice that it was completed :/ oops I hope u still read these reviews now :) also a quick question u keep referring to Marta being tall around what height?? Weird question but as ur very descriptive in your stories I said I'd ask! :) I can't wait to find out what Benjamin is so on to the next chapter :D
Randomgirl :)xx

Author's Response: First of all, yes, I still read these reviews (even if it takes me more than two weeks to respond- I'm sorry!). I love reviews!

As for the story, I wanted this chapter to be intense and show a hint of what Benjamin can do. And I think that by your reaction I achieved my goal! He has a lot of secrets that are close to being revealed (which you already know because I see you've finished the story because I'm late in answering your review- I'm sorry again!). But seeing what you're picking up on, I'd say you're more observant than poor Marta. Nothing can be too weird to pick up on in this story, so no worries there!

I initially wanted to mention Marta's specific height within the story, but at the time I was confused as to whether use metric or stick with the old inches/feet way because of what I recently learned on Pottermore about measurements. So I decided to just skate over the topic. But I always imagined Marta standing at five foot ten because then she would be taller than 98% of the female population and equal with half the males (thank you, college statistics class). So I always pictured her about the same height as Sirius and James and just shorter than Remus (I think Remus would be over six feet tall). In metric, the conversion would make Marta 177 cm or so. I know, a really long answer to a quick question, but now you know why I never stated the answer directly.

Thank you so much for another review and I hope you continue to enjoy! :)

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