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Review:shadowycorner says:
Aww. How is first person a challenge for you? I think you're doing great! I liked it in both of these chapters. There is a small distinction between Tonks and Charlie's voices, and they're also kind of similar which makes sense for their connection. I think I have a crush on Charlie. I mean, he is a Weasley (makes me love him automatically), he takes great care of dragons and he's portrayed here by an ooh la la man.

Seriously, the man! Who is he??

Reading about the dragon reservation was fantastic. I am so happy and bouncey this is the setting for the story. You described it so vividly, also all the positions - Trainers, Keepers, Handlers! And Charlie taking care of Bluesy was so sweet. I really adore animals (except chimpanzees because they are terrifying), so I also love people who understand and care for them. I think if I were in the magical world I would want to do what Charlie does. And be his girlfriend, too, maybe. Move over, Nymphadora! Actually, no. I love these two. Your Tonks is exactly how she should be - funny, bold, clumsy, honest and just lovable. Yaay, I have a new favorite to go on my list. How do you do this, really? I just...have no idea what else to say. Great job and keep on being awesome because you have a tiny little squeaky reader here who needs more of your stories!

Author's Response: Charlie. Ugh. Love him. He's so delicious, haha. The delicious man on the banner and CI's is Charlie Hunnam, his character that I fell in love with is Jax Teller on this awesome motorcycle gang serious called Sons of Anarchy. And in that show Jax is a tough, no one gets through his exterior, but loving and kind. So he made the best Charlie Weasley. Seriously though, look up Jax Teller Son's of Anarchy and go through pictures. Then just droll. :P

You turn me into this big puddle of squeaks. I'm reply to this in bed, and my fiance is sound asleep next to me, and I keep waiting for him to throw a pillow at me after waking up because I keep going 'eep!' hahah.

And! I'm so happy first person seemed natural in this. About every other paragraph I find myself switching back into third and have to go correct it :P

Okay. I have to be done blabbering now or else I'll just melt all the way. You are so awesome though, PS. ♥

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