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Review:RosieQueen says:
You know, one of the biggest reasons why I picked this story for first place was because you captured the emotion and hurt of bullying perfectly. It's like I'm stepping into Clara's shoes and I absolutely hated those bullies!

And the ending of this chapter was just so sweet! It was very realistic how Clara doubted James at first, but then he steps out and apologizes. A very good way to wrap up the chapter, it seems to have a very natural flow to it. :)

Overall, a wonderful job with this! Great characterization and an excellent start! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: I'm still so honoured that I came first! I read some of the other entries and I was shocked at how good they were! So I'm so flattered. :)

I'm glad you hate the bullies, I based them off people who bullied me (and others) so as I sat down and typed I kept thinking, "Muahahahaha I'm creating a character based on you and I'm going to make everyone hate you! Muahahaha!" :p

If any of my bullies came up to apologise to me, I wouldn't give them the time of the day. Even though Clara is rather trusting, she wouldn't be like, "OMG YAY BFFLS 5EVAH!", she'd have to take time.

And that's what I wrote...

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the ending of it. :) It was sweet, wasn't it? ;)

Thanks for the review! :D

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