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Review:Leslie says:
Ok so I know I just said that I couldn't wait for their reunion. And I was kind of freaking out at the beginning when it was actually happening! But then Ashley didn't really react much... Which is logical of course, especially with his appearance and with her not knowing what was going on. But I must admit, I was expecting some of the sappy stuff. lol this was really really great though. Quite realistic!!!

And I'm glad we finally understand what the deal with Ashley's family and Lucius was. Even though it makes me so angry that Voldemort never even knew (though I suspected it was something like this back in the scene where Draco became a death eater) it's still nice to finally kind of have that tied up.

But now I just want to know who those letters were written to! Unless they were some sort of diary...?

Anyway, this was fabulous. And now I'm really REALLY excited for the next chapter!!! Especially to see more Draco/Ashley time!! lol YAY!

Author's Response: I try to stay away from the overly sappy as much as possible. But, we do have a handful or so more chapters, so there's loads of possibilities of little servings of sappiness. But I think it's like she said, she had been preparing for a life without him, and although she imagined day in and day out of what she would say, I think she was more shocked than anything. I can understand how a situation like that goes, wishing you had said more than you really did.

I'll tell you right now because there's no resolution for that part: it was sort of just a diary that Lucius kept, for his own sake. Just wanted to let you know because I'm pretty sure I don't address it in the upcoming chapters.

Was it the most anti-climatic ending that I set you up for? I'm kinda hoping it was at least just a little, because I wanted to do something that set up the readers for this huge battle scene, but didn't...in the end, it was all made up.

If you're excited for this chapter, I can't wait until you read the next one!


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