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Review:Leslie says:
I'm not going to leave a long review this time, since I have 2 more chapters to read tonight. (Goodness, I keep getting behind! :P)
But aw, poor Draco! :( It's sad to see him all alone and suffering being all closed up...
And I've gotta admit, that part with Bellatrix kinda freaked me out. I could picture it and my heart rate definitely sped up a little. She scares me! haha
And I love the part with the house elves! It's so sweet, I love seeing Draco become a new person and look at things differently. And I love that they knew him well enough to know he's not as bad of a person as his father was. :D

Author's Response: I'm glad it came across as scary! I could see the picture in my head, like how they do in the movies, where you're seeing something from the camera's perspective, and then something pop's out! I didn't know if I conveyed that well or not, so I'm glad you thought that I did!

I was a little worried that the whole house elves idea was cheesy, but I felt that it had to be put in there. I always felt like Lucius was pressuring Draco to act in a way I don't think he would've if he had a more "normal" father.

Thanks for your review, you know how much I appreciate them!

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