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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here from the forums! :D

First off, I've been meaning to ask you...your SN/Penname...Fullmetal Alchemist? The reason I ask is because the Ouroboros design is just like FMA. And the name Alfonse... If not, ignore my crazy rant!

First off, I'm actually excited to read this! I haven't read a romance triangle in forever! I'm a closeted fan of Draco/Hermione/Ron.but shh...don't tell people! :D

I review as I read along, just so you know. I point out things I like, questions and perhaps a few typos/mistakes in order. Anyway! On with reviewing!

The coffee pot murmured as it created the elixir of life --That line has never been so true!

It took me a while to realize that Sin is most likely Hermione. So I have questions...how come no one can recognize her? Hahaha, I guess that's the mystery behind this, right?

Overall, I absolutely love the narrative. It flows nicely and the description is great! Not too much to where it felt too wordy, making me feel like scrolling down to make it go faster.

Thanks for the great read! :D

--Rosie/Perelandra

Author's Response: The Ouroboros has been one of my favorite symbols for as long as I can remember. It doesn't help that I am a huge fan of FMA. I thought Elrik would be to obvious of a name.That being said, If I ever had an owl, his name would definitely be Alfonse... I almost made Sin's last name Armstrong, but I figured that would be taking it too far.
My NaNo is a story about an alchemist, when I post it to here I hoe you get the chance to read it. Anyways back to review response. (^.^)*end little rant*

Thank you so much for the review! hehe I wont tell, this one is more drama, think soapnet and add like ten more scoops of plot twists. ( ok maybe i'm exadurating. )I just hope I can keep it interesting. I worry that I put to much forward to soon..?

I have had so much fun reading your stories as well. Now onto chapter three! Happy Reading ~ Lady

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