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Review:caoty says:
Some nice, shiny new word friends coming up courtesy of yours truly, since you asked so nicely.
I will admit to being more of a Queen fan than an ABBA fan, so now I've got Another One Bites the Dust in my head which is obviously going to make me happy. Prepare for a good review. :D

So, this was great fun. You've got that elusive teenage-boy-voice down perfect - Dean's funny, angry and sad and it definitely works well.
You've also captured the mood of Another One Bites the Dust well without resorting to violence, which is impressive.

I'm not quite sure about the Lavender thing, though. It seems like... maybe a bit random? Like, is he even attracted to her? I think that might be just me though.

Otherwise, this fic was well-written and the flow was pretty consistent, you've incorporated the song well and so... good luck with your challenge. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and I have to say my ABBA over Queen preference is only a slight one ;) You thought the song was incorporated nicely?! Yay! Thank you so much! I'm also glad you think I captured Dean well. Since he's not really a main character in the HP series, I was worried he wouldn't fit with the little we do know about Dean.
I see what you mean about Lavender. I meant it more that neither of them really care much about for each other, but that they're both sort of empty and hollow from the relationships they were in where they both really cared about the person, but were eventually left. It was just that they each needed someone to make them feel like they were... loved, I guess. Does that make sense? haha Obivously it didn't translate very well from my head to the writing. I'll have to see what I can do about making it more believeable.
Thank you for the lovely review!
~cb ")


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