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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there m'dear! It's so rare that you get a well thought out, awesome review form review tag as opposed to a few short lines. And you've given me a handful of those now, so I wanted to stop by and thank you. Then I remembered you were the author of For The Mudblood, which I would love if you continued ;)!

Anyway-- tear my heart out why don't you! It's hard to tell who got the worst end of the deal in all this. James and Lily, who will never see their son grow up, never have another child to hold and love, or Sirius who spent the majority of his life locked way for a crime he sure as heck didn't and wouldn't commit. rawr. Phew. Okay.. don't get teary Jami.. don't get teary..

The line about roasting chestnuts and laughing like only a 21 year old could. Oh God. That was heart wrenching :(.

I loved the way you switched from Sirius's pain, to his anger in the second section. He's more detached in that, which is really awesome and makes the flow so intense. Sirius is an amazing man, but not an even tempered one. Seeing his raw anger, his need to make the man who killed his family pay, was perfect. And it makes me so angry over again that Peter escaped. He should have sat in the cell Sirius was forced into for fifty years, reliving his betrayal over and over until it killed every part of him.

This was really well written. I loved the canon events tied in as well as the way you started in the Potters old home.

Thanks again for the awesome reviews you've left me!!!

Jami

Author's Response: Hi darling! So nice of you to review my stories. =)

Glad you liked my reviews, I'll stop by later to give some more. For the Mudblood is kind of in the crossroads, I have loads of written material for it, but I'm just not sure if I'm taking it in the right direction. I'll try to update it as soon as possible.

This was quite emotional to write, so in a way I'm glad that it evokes same feelings in you as it did in me when I wrote it.

Sirius's fate was one of the things that was hardest for me to understand in canon. I love his character, to me he will always be the ultimate Gryffie. =)

I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review! See you soon again. =)


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