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Review:ohmymerlin says:
NAUGHTY JAMES! YOU NAUGHTY, NAUGHTY BOY!

(Oh and I know Allegra didn't deserve my bleep but I was just frustrated, I know she's a perfectly nice girl so you can reassure her that I still like her as a character even though James is a NAUGHTY BOY!)

James, you silly goose! I'm sure it's hard being in the media all the time but MAN UP DAMMIT!

Or GROW up, you need to just accept that this is your life now!

AND APOLOGISE TO BRIGID, YOU ARE HIGH MAINTENANCE AND SHE WAS SO LOVELY TO YOU AND SHE WAS YOUR FRIEND!

AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SAID THOSE THINGS TO HER, THAT'S SO DISGUSTING AND RUDE THAT YOU EVEN THOUGHT ABOUT SAYING THAT!

NAUGHTY BOY!

*shakes fist*

It's like he had a temper tantrum and instead of going to his room and playing sad, depressing music, he went to the pub and slept with a... a new flavour.

Sigh, although James is acting like a brat in this chapter, I still loved it! He has flaws and it makes him seem so real!

But he's also VERY insecure and sometimes he takes things for granted! Also, he's very quick to judge others! And I know he has his reasons for the way he is, but it is kind of hypocritical!

But I still love him! :') Even with all his faults, I love him. :p

By the way, I'm not bashing the way you write James because I think you've got it perfect, I'm just frustrated at him, not you the writer.

If that makes sense...

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I want to read moreee!

And I want Carlotta back! D: James without Carlotta is a very angry and frustrated James.

That's the first sign that they're meant to be together forever. :p

7865416854841574174165123/10! ;D

Author's Response: Yeah, James has said some horrible things to a fair few people in this chapter. Unfortunately for him, there's more to come. He's learning about the ugly side of fame, and he's really not dealing with it well. He's a very flawed character, and I'm glad that that's becoming very clear. He has a lot of learning to do. And don't worry, I'm glad that you're frustrated at him! It means I'm doing things right. :)

James is VERY angry and frustrated without Carlotta. Not Good at all...

Thanks for reviewing!


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