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Review:hogwartswonderland says:
I like Jake but it seems so wierd how he just popped up when Alice began talking to the Marauders. I greatly await the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Well, I tried to make him more realistic because, honestly, most guys aren't jerks. Almost every fiction I have read involves a guy being a real jerk. But some of them are just normal people that can be quite annoying, haha. Yes, well, I wanted to portray Jake as more of a shy person.

But, if you recall, Alice does "bump into him" at one point in the fiction, it's just that his name is not given. *I know that readers will probably forget small moments like those (bumping into someone in the hallway) but I wanted to make sure that Alice "met" him in some way before actually introducing the character (whether directly or indirectly) *

If you look back at the first few chapters you will read it. Then, afterwards, she receives the note and formally meets him.

Thank you so much! Well, it's coming, I just need to write the second half of it. It's going to be quite long.

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