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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Love it. Although I wasn't prepared for the time jump, it works. The names are adorable, and pretty unique. Haven't heard Runa before. And yes, Scorp, I hope it's a boy. What would you name him? Hopefully not Scorp Jr, hehe.

So, I wonder how Rose is? I don't know if they've made up, but I really hope that she hasn't carried a grudge for all these years.

I'm sorry that this is finished, because you've introduced me to a new pairing that I can very well see working perfectly. And it has, with the way you've written it. Their relationship was fiery, had it's fair share of ups and downs, and you've created characters and a storyline that I couldn't help but become invested in. I read this in one sitting, so that should tell you that I really enjoyed this.

It's honestly a shame that it doesn't have more reviews. Anything outside of the ScoRose pairing doesn't always get much love though, which I just don't understand, especially when it's as beautifully written as this. While there were a few errors, such as run-on sentences and some spacing issues, they didn't take away from the story for me. I hope that you'll write about this pair again sometime in the future.

If your other stories are anything like this, I'll have to take a look at them. Thank you for writing. I enjoyed every minute of it.

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello,

Thank you so much. I had the Epilogue planned from about halfway through the story. I think I am becoming just as obsessed with the Next Generation's children as I was with the Next Generation! I wanted to try and continue with the Malfoy (and Black) tradtion of naming their kids after starts and constellations. Which is where Rana and Miram come in. And as for the baby... well maybe that will come up in Irrational's Epilogue. Maybe. Or maybe I will just write them all stories. But I can assure you, it will NOT be called Scorp Jr!

I suppose I kind of left the Rose situation hanging a bit so I might go back and edit that in. But if it helps now, she did not hold a grudge all these years but they are not as close as they used to be before the situation with Scorpius.

I'm sad it's finished too, which is why I started Irrational. I just missed them too much. And I have a story planned for two of their three children already. I'm so happy you love this pairing! It's good to know someone else thinks the same way as me about them! They wouldn't be them without their ups and downs and they will conitnue having them. Wow, thank you so much, I know I keep saying this but I really mean it. As you said, this story doesn't get many reviews but I love it and it makes me happy when other people take them time to read it and enjoy it. So thank you. Agan.

I will eventually go back and edit this and correct all the little mistakes but for now I think I will focus on my other stories. I may also do some one shot from their future. Maybe.

Please do check out my other stories! I would love to hear what you think about them too. And you will see Roxanne and Scorpius' relationship through other people's eyes.

You are very welcome, I enjoyed writing it. Also, if you are interested in my stories and are curious or just want to ask questions, there is a link to my blog on my Author's Page which you can check out. It has pictures and everything.

Anyway, thank you so, so much for taking the time not only to read this but the review every single chapter! I really appreciate it and I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. So thanks and I hope to hear more form you,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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