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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Wow. Your introduction was powerful. If the first several paragraphs were any reflection whatsoever of your writing style and abilities in the chapters to come, then I am completely blown away. This is, by far, my favorite first chapter of a fanfiction.

I enjoyed reading about the original characters you established, the unique setting, and the odd storyline. I did notice that you had one or two grammar or spelling mistakes, but they were minor and didn't affect the quality of the fanfiction.

I was a little lost at the beginning. And in the middle slightly. The hasty appearances of the characters was a little overwhelming and I struggled originally to keep them straight. I think I've got it figured out now, though.

This chapter didn't contain a great deal of plot, which is expected in the first several chapters of a story. However, I didn't find any evidence that this was a fanfiction. If I hadn't come across this story on Harry Potter fanfiction archive, then I would have assumed it was an original book. The main characters, or at least the ones we have been introduced to, could just be your average teenage muggles. There is nothing defining them as witches or wizards.

Superb job!

Author's Response: Oh wow. You've made my heart soar, I swear it! I always think of my style as a bit of a mess, the grammar and spelling mistakes come from the way I write; it all just sort of dribbles out and I try not to reread and edit too much because it changes the heart of it if it's over thought-I will look over again though, to see what needs fixing (mistakes aren't nice).

I'm sorry to hear I lost you a little here and there, in a way I think that's what I want to do with this story. The reader will never know everything, and everything is warped by Evie's eyes, albeit she sees a great deal.

As for the rest, the Harry Potterness WILL come in in future chapters, but I'm not a fanfiction writer, not is the essence of this particularly dependant on being in JK's world. All my stories, all my characters...they're mine, I just don't think I have the bravery or ability to make a world of my own for them. And if I did, lovely people such as yourself would never lay eyes on them. I suppose it's the only place there's a chance people will stumble over my words.

I can't thank you enough x


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