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Review:Kitty Potter says:
Hello there!

Overall you did a good job! At the begining and in the middle you needed to make your characters more clear and I didn't understand what was happening in the begining!Was she talking about Ron or Draco? I also didn't understand why she ran back to Draco and then ran away from him? Apart from that you did an amazong job conveying the emotions of your characters and describing memories, locations and people. Well done again!
Kitty Potter
Pls check my story if you have time!
10/10

Author's Response: Hi! The concept of the story was to give the readers a bit of mystery to whom Hermione was pertaining to. So I just added a bit of confusing ideas to make it an interesting one. About running back to Draco, she was having difficult decisions on what emotions to choose. So yep, I think that's it. Thank you for the review anyways! :)

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