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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Really good chapter.

Now. I see that there's tension between Al and James. What could have possibly happened to Nott to have landed her in the hospital wing. Don't tell me that she...?

Also. I like Penelope. This may have been just a glimpse of her, but she's hilarious. Kind of reminds me of Lee.

And that match. Scorpius and Roxanne up there in the air. I don't know why, but reading that makes me picture them dancing. They are so in sync that it's insane.

Then the end. Glad she realises that she doesn't hate him. Is that the first time she calls him Scorpius, by chance?

Reading on.

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello,

There is an awful lot of tension between Al and James. And it will stay that way for a good while yet. I'm afraid if you are curious, you'll have to check out Twist of Fate as I wouldn't want to give anything away in case you do decide to read it.

Ah, Penelope, I like her too. She is based of Lee (who is her dad obviously). She doesn't have a particularly important role but I just liked the idea of having a little minor character that was a bit of fun in what can be a fairly serious story.

Like I said, I love Quidditch. And so do Scorpius and Roxanne. Therefore, it was only fitting that Roxanne realised how she really felt whislt playing Quidditch. It did kind of turn into a dance... on broomsticks.

I think that might be the first time she calls him Socrpius, at least out loud at any rate. And she finally realises what we've known for a while...

Thanks again,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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