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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Wow. Just... wow. Well, well, well. Miss Roxanne. What can I say really? Those poor house elves, haha. But that was quite the scene. I may have fanned myself a couple of times before I arrived at the bottom. The title of this chapter is apt, is all I'm going to say.

I think Malfoy likes getting under her skin. Why else would he be trying to get her worked up? Unless it's just because she seems to be willing to kiss him back after they fight. But hey, I love you and I hate you works for me.

And oh goodness. Him telling her that he loves her? I was totally not expecting that. I think he means it. Is Rox afraid? Does she feel the same way? Curious.

Also. The last section of this chapter? Wow. Al and Nott? Surprise. They may be getting married? Double shot of shock. Nott being pregnant with Al's baby? May as well just dig a hole and shovel dirt over me because I may have died from disbelief. Okay, dramatic, I know. But, it's just so surprising. Now I'm wondering why Al punched James, because now I think that it may have something to do with her. Does James like her? Is the baby James's? Yes, I like to jump to conclusions. Sue me. But I just have this strong suspicion that their fight had something to do with Nott. Ahhh.

Reading on.

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello!

Yes. Well. I got a little carried away. Sorry about that. Unfortunatly for the House Elves, I do not think this is the first time they have been exposed to something so... fiery.

Oh Malfoy loves getting under her skin. In fact, he just loves any attention he gets from her. As you have already found my story Irrational, you will know that Malfoy's thoughts will be revealed in time.

That bit? That was unexpected for me too. It just happened. And I was like 'oh, that wasn't in the plan'. But there you go, it was as impulsive for me as it was for him. Roxanne is probably confused. That is probably the best way of summing it up.

Haha. Yeah, about that, this mainly comes from my story Twist of Fate which occurs at the same time as Paradox and continues afterwards (so you get to see a bit more of Scorpius and Roxanne after Paradox finishes). It is from Vivian Nott's point of view so if you are interested, check it out, it is a bit longer than Paradox and deals with some (obviously) more serious themes. But I think Roxanne is just as shocked as you are when she finds out. But I will give you a clue, one of your two potential conclusions may be correct.

Thank you so much, once again,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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