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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
I want to begin by apologizing that this review came almost a month after you originally requested it. Now, moving on to your review.

I've taken the time to read some of your other pieces, and this is, by far, my favorite. I was actually quite surprised when I began reading this fanfiction, as it was not at all what I was expecting based upon the summary.

I'm normally not a huge fan of any fanfictions from Snape's point of view, but I found this story quite appealing. This fanfiction didn't shed him in a horrible light; instead, it revealed that he had very strong emotions, he was just adept at keeping them hidden beneath the surface.

I really enjoyed your characterization and portrayal of Snape. His attitude toward Lily's death was perfect, and his emotions were raw and exposed. It was quite interesting to discover how Lily's death impacted his life, as it is simply skimmed over in the books.

The plot was also spot-on. Obviously, it's a one-shot, and there isn't a significant portion of plot in any one-shot. However, I felt like you were harping a bit on Harry's resemblance of his father, yet with Lily's eyes. I was a little bored after the second or third time this was repeated, and merely skimmed over the sentences.

Overall, lovely job! Keep up the great writing!

8/10

Author's Response: No, no! It's okay! I should have checked to see if you were still available instead of just requesting! But thank you for coming anyway, I really appreciate it. :)

Wow! You read some of my other stuff? And this is your favourite? That really means a lot to me, thank you so much.

I'm glad the summary didn't give anything away, I was hoping to surprise people. ;)

I'm glad you liked this type of Snape rather than the more Canon!Snape we often see. :p I didn't want to shed him in a horrible light, more that he was misunderstood.

I'm glad you liked it! :D

Okay, a bit too repetitive then? I'll change that when I have time to actually sit down and fix everything! Thanks for the advice!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this, it's really appreciated! ♥


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