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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Okay. This chapter was amazing.

While I would have liked to see the aftermath of the meeting with her parents, this was still good. We finally get a taste of Malfoy, and discover the reason for her beating him up. I must say, it's a very good reason, though if we believe him, she enjoyed it, heh. Could her rage have been because she enjoyed it and didn't want to, as opposed to just because he kissed her? Curious. Curious.

And I loved the Quidditch match. I like the finish, and I especially love that paragraph where Bella and her are racing for the snitch. It was just so well done, and I read it again just because I enjoyed it so much. 'a glimmer of white-blonde hair; a tilt of the head;' Perfect. Seriously.

I also like that she's concerned some about her anger. I mean, she's getting to the point where she doesn't even realise that she's punching glass until after the fact. I hope she's able to sort it! But I'm still enjoying her character so far, and can't wait to see where this is going.

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello yet again,

Wow. Thank you.

I probably should have paced myself a little better and included that so I migh add that in at some point, thanks for pointing that out. Oh Malfoy... It is a very good reason. Or at least, that is was Roxanne will always say. That is a very good theory, although I suspect she would deny it entirely.

I love Quidditch. So I enjoyed writing the match, I didn't want to make it too long and tedious though so I'm so pleased you liked it. I love favourite quotes too! So thank you very much.

Oh, at this point, she is very concerned about her increasing anger problem. And with good reason. I would be worried if I were her... But then again, she has a particular cause for all her anger.

Thanks for the review,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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