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Review:ValWitch21 says:
She laughed and dodged out of the way. 'Don't get sarcastic with me, Black; I'll sit on you and then you'll know the meaning of pain.'

'Sirius, my boy,' William patted the young man's knee with a frail and shaking hand. 'James has had a brother since the day he first met you.'

^ This is too much for me. The link between James and Sirius is so perfect. The way you inject some of Alice and Frank is so perfect. The way you suggest Peter's betrayal is perfect. The second part of this chapter is perfect, and I won't detail because I want to be coherent. Your last line is perfect in an eery and terible way.

And I didn't say in my last review because I forgot, but I loved the scene where Remus and Peter play Mrs. Black aganst Mrs. Potter. That was epic.

You are amazing.

&hearts

Author's Response: Aah you're so lovely! I'm really glad you've enjoyed this story so much ♥

Epic! Haha, thanks! I wanted to show Peter and Remus messing around, so often they're left to be bookish bystanders.

You are lovely.

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