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Review:ValWitch21 says:
As the years shuffled by and Sirius's elegant, muscled body wasted away to mere knotted ropes on a cracking frame, he wondered at the fact that his dog-self remained relatively healthy and large, if somewhat skinnier than his days as a bounding pup at school.

^ This. This. Athene, I can not even describe what I feel like after reading this.

Okay. I'm going to stop before I say something extremely dumb and soppy, but I'll try to fit in something that makes sense.

Well. I love the way you alternate happy memories and Sirius in Azkaban. And the little bits of cannon you weave into your story... Excuse me while I go roll in a pile of feels.

Speaking of feels, Sirius' emotions, GAH. You write him so desperate and alone and empty and hopeless I feel a bit tearful now. Why are you doing this to me?

It is time for me to leave, I have to read on. But another of my favourite quotes before that:

Summer, thought Sirius instinctively. Somehow, the faintest touch of warmth, the tiniest trace of green seemed to have been borne in on the material of the man's pinstriped cloak. It was the most tantalising, beautiful, painful sensation.

&hearts

Author's Response: Aw, Val! Thanks for the lovely review. I don't know why I do these things to you! I just like giving people the Feels. Especially the Sirius Feels. You've picked out two of my own favourite lines ;)

Sorry it's taken me a while to respond to your lovely reviews, I've hurt my back and can't sit at my computer for long.
Athene xoxo


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