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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
I'm sorry this review is coming so late. Anyway, I loved this chapter, especially the ending. It was a bit predictable, but still left me with the feeling that someone had just dumped a bucket of icy water over my head. That's an accomplishment, and a fairly impressive one at that.

Characterization- I was blown away by your strange, and somewhat daring, choice of characters. I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction with such an eclectic combination of characters. I really enjoyed your balance between OCs and J.K. Rowling's characters; you didn't create an entirely new set of characters and introduce them all in the first sentence, and you also didn't take each and every one of J.K. Rowling's characters and tell their life's stories. You did a beautiful job developing your characters throughout the chapter. Instead of listing each of their traits outright, you portrayed them indirectly through words and actions. I'm not typically exceptionally fond of Next Gen fanfictions, but yours was one of the few exceptions.

Plot- I enjoyed the balance you established between plot and introducing different characters. You had a nice balance between the two, and the plot moved along fairly quickly, helping to keep my attention throughout the entire chapter. The events seemed extremely believable and occurred in a logical order.

Flow- The events flowed very smoothly and I must applaud you for your flawless transitions.

Interest- While this is not a fanfiction that I would pick up on my own, I quickly became addicted to the realistic characters and unique plot. In other words, once I began reading, I couldn't stop. Therefore, you did a nice job captivating a reader's attention.

Overall, I liked the original approach that you took to this fanfiction. Even though it might not appeal to all audiences, it certainly captured my attention while I was reading. By the way, I love your banner. Fantastic job!

9/10

Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! I was worried about all the things that I needed you to look at and once I got this review, I smiled a bit! Anywho, thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate you taking your time to do this for me!

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