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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
It seems strange that no one at all mentioned Fred I. I know that her parents walked out of the room whenever the war is mentioned, but do they take the kids with them too? Also, do Fred and Rox not see the rest of the family often? I don't know. For them to not know, everyone else would have been hush hush about it, and Nana seemed stunned that Fred was never brought up. I'm not picking at this or anything; just trying to figure it out in my mind. Do you mind explaining? Or maybe I should just read on =P.

But the chapter was well-written. You're very good with description, and throwing little bones that have the reader wanting more. I'm still curious about the Professor. 'Tonks' as the password is extremely weird, and my mind is stirring with all kinds of possibilities as to just who he is.

Reading on!

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello again,

I can understand your confusion on this point and I think it has been mention by someone else as well. I am thinking of going back and editing this to make it more realistic but for now I have to work on my other stories. I just wasn't sure how George would have handled Fred's death and in my head, he just did not handle it well at all. To be honest, I have never lost anything even remotely close to what George lost so I was a bit in the dark so to speak about how to breach the whole topic. I will hopefully work on this at some point and maybe make it more understandable but I can definitly see your point.

Thank you very much though, this was my first story so it can be a little rough at times but I'm glad you think it is well written. Ah the ever fanscinating Headmaster... Maybe I should do a one shot for him or something?

Anyway, thanks again for the review,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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